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The Miscommunication

The Miscommunication


“You are my best friend Nidhi, I want you there at my birthday party at any cost.”

Varun had always admired Nidhi a lot more than friends but that was just a one sided attraction. Nidhi never took him more than a best friend. She never even had the faintest of a hint. They were great together and had a lot of fun but that was just the end of the line for her.

“I told you Varun I have an exam day after tomorrow. I can’t be at your birthday bash tomorrow but I will meet you the next day for sure. And let me tell you, I have decided what to gift you. Just wait for it and you will love it.” She explained.

“It’s your parents aren’t they? You can study all you want before my party you know it. But they won’t allow you right?” he exclaimed frustrated. She held his hand. “It’s not like that Varun, I…” She was explaining when he interrupted “Then what is it Nidhi? You know you are my best friend. What will my friends think when you don’t turn up?” “It is an important exam for me Varun why don’t you understand. Why are you so furious about it? We’ll hang out some other day” she tried to explain.

“I will have fun with my friends. But you don’t talk to me ever again.” he said in an irritated tone looking straight into her eyes. She sighed.

For a brief time there was silence between them. She could not understand what was wrong with him and why he was acting like she was his girlfriend. He was too lost in her eyes to think of anything else. She thought it was better to break the moment and leave for her home. It was no use arguing over the matter with him anymore.

“Miss me!” she said. He mistook it as “Kiss Me."

He kissed her on her lips with a tender affection. Puzzled, she stepped back. Perplexity spread through her eyes. She slapped him in anger and left the place frantically. He stood there baffled.


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda


Insight:
She said ____. He mistook it to be ____.
This was the theme on BlogAdda Wow this week. The was supposed to revolve around a miscommunication. I hope you like the post.


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amarnaik
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October 6, 2013 at 8:21 PM delete

nicely worded for WOW

http://amarnaik.wordpress.com/2013/10/06/confusion-created-as-a-result-of-the-miscommunication/

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Shilpa Garg
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October 6, 2013 at 8:29 PM delete

Ouch!! That's a terrible misunderstanding!

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Sakshi Nanda
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October 6, 2013 at 9:07 PM delete

Yes, some miscommunication. But, if she wanted him to miss her, sooner than later the kiss would have happened. Some girls just like to take it slow. Very real post. Stemming from experience, is it? :D

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preethi
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October 6, 2013 at 9:16 PM delete

poor chap...but then the story could be a beginning too :) agree with sakshi :)

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Kalpana Solsi
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October 6, 2013 at 11:01 PM delete

The miss did not like his kiss.

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Anmol Rawat
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October 6, 2013 at 11:31 PM delete

Oh no, its purely a fiction ;)

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Anmol Rawat
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October 6, 2013 at 11:32 PM delete

Even I agree with Sakshi :D
I may write a sequel sometime :p

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Anmol Rawat
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October 6, 2013 at 11:33 PM delete

It is something that should not have happened; the boy will wish

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Anmol Rawat
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October 6, 2013 at 11:36 PM delete

yes but some misunderstanding can lead to a fruitful beginning (as some bloggers have mentioned below) :)

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Shruti Modi
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October 7, 2013 at 12:05 PM delete

Aah.. Miscommunication at its best ;)
good one buddy :D

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anitaexplorer
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October 7, 2013 at 6:39 PM delete

Ouch! Miscommunication with Kiss & Miss!
Short & sweet like Kismis (Raisin) :)

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Anmol Rawat
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October 7, 2013 at 8:46 PM delete

He He 'Kismis'.

Thank you for the comment :)

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