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Moment of Passion

Moment of Passion - Five Sentence Fiction

The room was mildly lit with the luminous full moon which was sizzling up the already heated environment for them. Wrapped naked in each others' arms, the desire was prevalent in their eyes as they kissed each other passionately. As she pushed him down and climbed on top of him moaning with pleasure, he placed his hands on her supple bosom greedily. A faint smile crossed across her face and then she opened her mouth wide. He could only get a glimpse of her fangs that radiated the moonlight before she dug them in his neck. 

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blackbeauty
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August 9, 2014 at 1:57 PM delete

Omg!! You had five sentences and you managed to draw an array of emotions... great job Anmol...

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Anita
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August 9, 2014 at 6:12 PM delete

What an end! :)
Good work, Anmol!

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Anmol Rawat
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August 9, 2014 at 6:38 PM delete

Thank you :) I feel good if you could feel that array of emotion :)

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ruchi2312
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August 9, 2014 at 10:21 PM delete

And Twilight saga continue....:-D
Nicely done, expressive.Cheers to Imagination!

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Anmol Rawat
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August 10, 2014 at 12:51 AM delete

He He yeah :D
Thank you so much Ruchi :)

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Laurel Regan
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August 10, 2014 at 2:36 AM delete

Wow, surprise ending! Nicely done.

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August 10, 2014 at 3:25 AM delete

Bloody passion! The vampire strikes again.

Lily

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Soumya
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August 11, 2014 at 1:06 PM delete

Stephanie Mayer has competition! :P

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Sakshi Raina
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August 11, 2014 at 1:16 PM delete

Short and full of emotions. You managed to send shivers down my spine.

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Red Handed
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August 11, 2014 at 5:37 PM delete

GODDAMN!!!! That wasnt expected. :D

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Anmol Rawat
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August 11, 2014 at 6:37 PM delete

Thank you Laurel :) Keep visiting :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 11, 2014 at 6:37 PM delete

Yeah ! hey have taken over our imaginations I guess :p

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Anmol Rawat
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August 11, 2014 at 6:37 PM delete

Lol :D She's the one making them all famous ;)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 11, 2014 at 6:38 PM delete

Oh I did? That's good to hear :D
Thank you for dropping by :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 11, 2014 at 6:38 PM delete

Then I have succeeded :D

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Sherri Hayter
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August 11, 2014 at 7:29 PM delete

I didn't see that coming lol! Great job Anmol <3

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August 11, 2014 at 9:19 PM delete

Haha! Trust me, I knew it the moment I started reading the first line. Couldn't help but relate it to Epic movie (u kno which one) :P Great write up Anmol!

Would you believe if I said I actually read it all over again :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 12, 2014 at 1:02 AM delete

Lol. You watch a hell lot of movies dude :D
Well thank you :)
If you say so I might actually believe ;)

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SuperLux
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August 12, 2014 at 8:58 PM delete

creepy. effective. very timely to tonight's moonlit sky. :)

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August 14, 2014 at 6:46 AM delete

oh--oh! surprise...lol
good take :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 17, 2014 at 7:34 PM delete

He He :D Not a pleasant one though :p
Thank you :)

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