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Waiting for Him

Waiting for Him

She climbed on his back and he carried her to the bed while she giggled kissing frequently on his neck. Without losing a moment, he dropped her and they began undoing each other’s clothes while kissing fervently. He climbed on top of her as he had always loved to take control of the things. Lust was prominent in their eyes as they greedily savored each other’s body filling the room with their moans.

At another corner of the city, his wife waited for him to return home from his office while he made love to his secretary.


This post has been written for Lillie McFerrin Writes - Five Sentence Fiction.
This week's word: Waiting.
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August 21, 2014 at 8:13 PM delete

Five sentence fiction! What a great idea. I love it. Intriguing writing. This genre of erotica has become popular recently which I believe will help couples become more intimate when they read together!

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vishalbheeroo
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August 21, 2014 at 8:22 PM delete

Brilliant take on the prompt. The erotica has edge coupled with infedility:)

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bookworm
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August 22, 2014 at 3:31 AM delete

A story repeated so many times. Would like to know how it ends, eventually. Alana

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August 22, 2014 at 4:24 AM delete

hot tale (pun intended)
sorry for wife...
Randy

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Soumya
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August 22, 2014 at 2:46 PM delete

Such men should be killed. Sadly infidelity is becoming really prominent in our society now.

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cifar shayar
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August 22, 2014 at 5:05 PM delete

infidelity should be crime , nicely narrated

Wait Over

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Ranu 802
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August 22, 2014 at 5:33 PM delete

What an irony, I feel for the wife.

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Anita
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August 22, 2014 at 5:54 PM delete

Sorry for the wife. Angry with the man.
Well expressed, Anmol!
The first post in the list too! :)

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Viyoma
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August 22, 2014 at 6:09 PM delete

Poor Wife, Selfish Secretary and an un-pardonable husband. But a very bold post. Nice take on fiction.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:17 PM delete

Yea erotica is popular though I also feel it is overrated at the same time.
Thank you for dropping by :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:18 PM delete

Thank you for visiting and appreciating Sheila :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:19 PM delete

On a happy note for the woman probably :)
That's how you want to perceive it.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:19 PM delete

Thank you for dropping by :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:20 PM delete

It is becoming prominent in every society and yes it's sad. Faith is the most important thing in a married relation and if you are tearing it apart, you should be punished.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:21 PM delete

Yes it should be. Thank you :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:22 PM delete

Yeah. Thank you Anita :)
It's always good to see your comment.

Yeah it feels great to post the first one :D

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Anmol Rawat
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August 22, 2014 at 6:22 PM delete

Agreed!
Thank you Viyoma :)

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August 22, 2014 at 8:25 PM delete

Good one bro! :) Well written.
Now, let's kill the guy, should we? ;) ohk! Peace! Divorce :P

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August 22, 2014 at 10:43 PM delete

Ah, dear. Such a triangle. It's sad.

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Swathi Shenoy
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August 22, 2014 at 11:05 PM delete

aha unfaithful husband!! good one anmol ;-)

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P!yu
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August 23, 2014 at 12:27 AM delete

Yes, infidelity has become very common and major issue for current generation...nice post...

Here’s my take on Waiting prompt, you are invited to read it

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Shailaja V
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August 23, 2014 at 12:29 AM delete

Sigh... seemingly a more rampant reality these days. Good take on the prompt.

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August 23, 2014 at 10:12 PM delete

Happen...but told wonderfully.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 24, 2014 at 8:04 PM delete

Thank you :)
Ya Divorce and a happy life ahead of the woman. That's how I will do it :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 24, 2014 at 8:04 PM delete

Yea it is. But hope for a bright future for the wife :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 24, 2014 at 8:05 PM delete

Thank you Piyu :)
I just hope it does not happen to anyone.

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Anmol Rawat
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August 24, 2014 at 8:06 PM delete

Yes indeed. Thank you :)

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mjshorts
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August 25, 2014 at 3:58 PM delete

A great take on the prompt.
Loved that last sentence - the dutiful or unsuspecting wife.

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August 25, 2014 at 7:59 PM delete

Its sad that such scenarios do exist.. Nicely told!

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Anmol Rawat
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August 28, 2014 at 2:04 AM delete

Thank you for liking it :)

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Anmol Rawat
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August 28, 2014 at 2:05 AM delete

Yea no one should ever go through that. I just wish people start being faithful to their partners.

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