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Love Broke My Heart!

Love Broke My Heart

The cool droplets of rain fall on me as I move my head out of the umbrella and look high up in the sky. It’s ironic how things change with time; the rain which was a source of happiness and rejuvenated me in any mood back in time is merely helpful in hiding my tears now.

Probably that is the reason why I envy time; it moves on, even if you are left behind. I don’t know how to move on in my life when the person who was the reason of my life has left me all alone weeping in the pain of separation.

I envy those people for whom love comes as a blessing in their life as, a broken heart is all I ended up with in the end.


This post has been written for Lillie McFerrin Writes - Five Sentence Fiction.
This week's word: Envy.

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Soumya
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November 7, 2014 at 6:31 PM delete

Ah rain and all the emotions associated with it. Sometimes rain helps washing away the pain too.

I loved the way you have envied time here. Great thought!

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Ankita
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November 7, 2014 at 6:43 PM delete

love destroys many...beautiful!

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November 7, 2014 at 7:01 PM delete

What a unique take on envy. Time moves on while the broken-hearted remain in the past.

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Ramya P
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November 7, 2014 at 7:47 PM delete

Nice take on the prompt.... :)

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Anita
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November 7, 2014 at 7:56 PM delete

Rain, broken-heart, time...all are for a reason.
Am sure acche fun aane waale gain & the hero will love the rain again!
Great expression, Anmol :)

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Anita
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November 7, 2014 at 8:02 PM delete

*hain* & he will gain;)

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Shilpa Gupte
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November 7, 2014 at 10:10 PM delete

That was a sad story, Anmol. Very well expressed!
Just one observation, if you don't mind : I have read quite a many of your posts which have 'heartbreak' as the subject. And, each of those posts seem to be written from the bottom of your heart.

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November 8, 2014 at 3:06 AM delete

The same time can make a magic in your life, when you become someone's love and many others's envy!!

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Ranu 802
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November 8, 2014 at 3:09 AM delete

Thank you for this awesome five sentence fiction!

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM delete

Hmmm yeah. :)
Thank you Soumya :)

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM delete

Indeed ! Thank you Ankita :)

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM delete

Well that is unsure as of now. The thing he envies is the only one having that answer :)
Thank you Anita.

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM delete

Also, Ache *din* aane waale hain :p

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:29 PM delete

Thank you Shilpa :)
Oh no I never mind :) Well what can I say in that in an open platform :p :D

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Anmol Rawat
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November 8, 2014 at 2:30 PM delete

That's the thing. Not all get that pleasure. How will the world create a balance otherwise? :)

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November 9, 2014 at 3:44 PM delete

I can see why the person would be envious of love when left with a broken heart. And I'm glad their tears merge with the rain. By the way Anmol, you seem to be a pro at writing sad stories! ;) <3

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Anmol Rawat
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December 9, 2014 at 2:37 AM delete

Oh that is a compliment I keep looking for ;) Thank you so much Elly :)

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