Tum ko dekha, to ye khayal aaya
Ke jaise noor utar aya ho zameen par aasman se
Ke jaise is dil ko shayad tha intezaar isi muskurahat ka
Ibadat me agar yakeen tha to shayad isi pal ke liye
Dil dhadakta tha aaj tak zindagi dene ke liye
Aaj dhadkane ruk gayi fir bhi zindagi ko pa liya hai
Tareef me lafz to likh dalun sainkadon
Betahaasha mohabbat ne lafz cheen liye bas iska gham hai
Chahunga tujhe zindagi bhar aisa yakeen tha mujhe khud par
Kambakht sansen sath chod dengi beech me, ye ilm na tha
Khwahish agar koi poori kar de aaj meri
Agle har janam me jeena chahunga sath tere....
I brought the letter close to my heart as tears rolled down my cheeks. He was no more. But he had completed my wish, a stupid wish. When asked for a birthday gift last year, I had stupidly asked him to write something for me in Hindi knowing the fact that he was not comfortable with the language. Of course, he did not do it and I did not mind as it was just a stupid wish.
Tomorrow is my birthday and he did it this time. He did it before he died in the hospital. I sobbed loudly clutching my arms around his body. "I love you so much", I told him repeatedly as I cried my heart out.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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21 comments
Write commentsWell written anmol.. kudos to you!!!
ReplyNice n touching...
ReplyWonderfully written. Sad story that had me nearly in tears (had to fight back!)
ReplySuch lovely words in the poem. You wrote them?
Lovely write!! Wowww... :)
ReplyShalzzz|Loving Life
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Very touching!!! Loved it!
Reply~S(t)ri
Smile, it makes (y)our day!
Touching story, beautifully written!
ReplyThat was actually wow :) Beautiful.
ReplyThank you so much :)
ReplyThank you Namrata :)
ReplyOf course, I wrote them :p Everything on my blog is written by me and if I take someone else's words I will surely mention it :D
ReplyIf you really felt that emotional, then I am feeling great for I didn't know I could write that good :)
Thank you Shalzzz :)
ReplyI visited your blog. See for my comment :)
Thank you so much. :)
ReplyLove your signature !
Thank you so much :)
ReplyThank you Parvathy :)
ReplyThere is creative reading as well as creative writing.
ReplyVery beautiful and touching!
Replyvery heart touching post Anmol
ReplyU write so well and creatively
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Thank you Vandana :)
ReplyThank you so much :)
ReplySamajh ni aya :p
ReplyFor the good writing, need to be reading creative story.
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