I saw her smiling from a hidden corner where no one could see me crying; crying for the fact that she could not be mine. A moment that was defining her beautiful life ahead was defining the worst that could happen to me.
People say that some love stories are not meant to find a closure however they omit the fact that the pain can be worse than death.
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6 comments
Write commentsInteresting piece. It begs to wonder, who would invite a lover scorned to their wedding - unless the forsaken never revealed their feelings.
ReplyEvocative piece, telling a tragic story for one, while the other remains oblivious in five sentences.
ReplyThank you :)
ReplyThat's open to your assumption :)
Thank you Francene :)
ReplyOpen to your imagination :)
The aching heart!! Well written, Anmol.
ReplyThank you Vinitha :)
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