She climbed on his back and he carried her to the bed while she giggled kissing frequently on his neck. Without losing a moment, he dropped her and they began undoing each other’s clothes while kissing fervently. He climbed on top of her as he had always loved to take control of the things. Lust was prominent in their eyes as they greedily savored each other’s body filling the room with their moans.
At another corner of the city, his wife waited for him to return home from his office while he made love to his secretary.
This post has been written for Lillie McFerrin Writes - Five Sentence Fiction.
This week's word: Waiting.
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35 comments
Write commentsFive sentence fiction! What a great idea. I love it. Intriguing writing. This genre of erotica has become popular recently which I believe will help couples become more intimate when they read together!
ReplyBrilliant take on the prompt. The erotica has edge coupled with infedility:)
ReplyGreat post, I love it.
ReplyA story repeated so many times. Would like to know how it ends, eventually. Alana
Replyhot tale (pun intended)
Replysorry for wife...
Randy
Such men should be killed. Sadly infidelity is becoming really prominent in our society now.
Replyinfidelity should be crime , nicely narrated
ReplyWait Over
What an irony, I feel for the wife.
ReplySorry for the wife. Angry with the man.
ReplyWell expressed, Anmol!
The first post in the list too! :)
Poor Wife, Selfish Secretary and an un-pardonable husband. But a very bold post. Nice take on fiction.
ReplyYea erotica is popular though I also feel it is overrated at the same time.
ReplyThank you for dropping by :)
Thank you Vishal :)
ReplyThank you for visiting and appreciating Sheila :)
ReplyOn a happy note for the woman probably :)
ReplyThat's how you want to perceive it.
Thank you for dropping by :)
ReplyIt is becoming prominent in every society and yes it's sad. Faith is the most important thing in a married relation and if you are tearing it apart, you should be punished.
ReplyYes it should be. Thank you :)
ReplyYeah. Thank you Anita :)
ReplyIt's always good to see your comment.
Yeah it feels great to post the first one :D
Agreed!
ReplyThank you Viyoma :)
Good one bro! :) Well written.
ReplyNow, let's kill the guy, should we? ;) ohk! Peace! Divorce :P
Ah, dear. Such a triangle. It's sad.
Replyaha unfaithful husband!! good one anmol ;-)
ReplyYes, infidelity has become very common and major issue for current generation...nice post...
ReplyHere’s my take on Waiting prompt, you are invited to read it
Sigh... seemingly a more rampant reality these days. Good take on the prompt.
ReplyHappen...but told wonderfully.
ReplyThank you :)
ReplyYa Divorce and a happy life ahead of the woman. That's how I will do it :)
Yea it is. But hope for a bright future for the wife :)
ReplyThank you Swathi :)
ReplyThank you Piyu :)
ReplyI just hope it does not happen to anyone.
Yes indeed. Thank you :)
ReplyThank you :)
ReplyA great take on the prompt.
ReplyLoved that last sentence - the dutiful or unsuspecting wife.
Its sad that such scenarios do exist.. Nicely told!
ReplyThank you for liking it :)
ReplyYea no one should ever go through that. I just wish people start being faithful to their partners.
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